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    1. The artist's work pushes our civilization to a higher level。

    改进:Artists' work upgrades our civilization。

    2. For example, you work in a big factory。

    改进: Suppose you work in a big factory。

    3. You'll find you are fit for business and you can make it your main job。

    改进:You'll find that you are cut out for business and you can make it your career。

    4. We will own nothing at all if we depend on luck。

    改进: We will get nowhere if we rely on luck。

    5. He will get a higher salary to improve his living level。

    改进: He will get a higher salary, thus improving his life。

    6. Their brain is still very young。

    改进: They are still immature。

    7. Dissatisfaction makes people produce desire for better things。

    改进: Dissatisfaction impels people for the better。

    8. They can't analyze clearly what is right and what is wrong。

    改进: They cannot tell right from wrong。

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    改进: It will help children learn to make good use of time。

    10. Though it is not the best job, it afford to his life。

    改进: Though it is not the best job, a job is a job. He can make ends meet with it。

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    改进: Since people are never satisfied with their status quo, they want further development。

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    改进: The only thing they need to do is to find a job that can bring them big money。

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